(;SZ[19]AP[GOWrite:2.0.05]FF[4]GM[1]FG[259:]PB[Steve Kroon]PW[Rory Beling ]PM[1]RE[B+10.5]DT[18 May 2006]BR[3k]HA[0]WR[5k]GN[ ]KM[6.5]
;B[pd]
;W[dp]
;B[dc]
;W[pp]
;B[jq]
;W[nd]
;B[de]
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;C[Unusual to play a low move as the second move in a double approach.]W[qf]
;C[RoseDuke\:  This move has been considered as a slack move.  Any book which give this move as a joseki move should be burned. ]B[oe]
;W[qc]
;B[pc]
;W[qd]
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;C[Empty triangle not nice at all. How is the variation I give?

RoseDuke\:  Empty triangle is a terrible move, ]B[pe]
;W[qe]
;B[ne]
;W[jd]
;C[Now it feels overconcentrated]B[md]
;W[jf]
;B[cj]
;W[hq]
;B[nq]
;W[pn]
;B[jo]
;W[ho]
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;C[RoseDuke\: a very small endgame move at this time.  ]B[qb]
;W[rb]
;B[pb]
;C[RoseDuke\:  This is too smal.  C5 is bigger.]W[ph]
;C[I expected to finish this invasion in sente and then to play Q2, expecting, perhaps R3, followed by me playing R8.]B[cq]
;W[dq]
;B[cp]
;W[co]
;B[bo]
;W[cn]
;B[bn]
;C[This is an odd point, but i didn'nt know how to handle it. I think I handled it badly because I saddled myself with a weak group.

RoseDuke\:  White cannot tenuki from bottum left side, C7 is critical.  Now Black can simply cut at D5 and white has no answer to that move.  ]W[lp]
;C[Should this just be at M3 or R3?]B[jm]
;W[pq]
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;C[RoseDuke\: This is the wrong place to place a stone.  ]B[lq]
;W[kp]
;B[jp]
;W[kq]
;B[hm]
;W[fn]
;B[cm]
;C[RoseDuke\:  99% of the time, double peeps are terrible moves, if you ever want to improve, first remove this move from your considerations.  ]W[in]
;C[RoseDuke\: now black is consolidating.]B[jn]
;W[im]
;B[il]
;W[hl]
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;C[RoseDuke\:  WRONG!!!!!!! There is no need to save the one stone.  ]B[gl]
;W[hk]
;B[io]
;W[hn]
;B[gm]
;W[ik]
;B[jl]
;W[gk]
;B[el]
;C[RoseDuke\:  ?????  white please explain what he is intend to do here?  ]W[np]
;B[mp]
;W[mo]
;B[mq]
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;C[RoseDuke\: ???  ]W[ln]
;C[After this, white just lost a lot of territory.   ]B[kr]
;W[gc]
;B[ge]
;W[hd]
;C[RoseDuke\:  Shape, shape and shape, add some reading also helps.  The way for you two to improve is to go over some games played by pros or other top amateurs.  Learn the way they develop their games, and try get used to the shape in their games.  Most important of all, PLEASE TRY REMOVE DOUBLE PEEP FROM YOUR GAME!!!!!!!]B[jk]
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;C[SIMPLE....]W[kr]
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;B[hk]
;W[gl]
;C[RoseDuke\:  Simply sacrifice the one stone give black much more in return.  Now white's 16 and 18 are isolated and weak.  ]B[ik]
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;C[RoseDuke\:  This is a better move.  ]B[lr]
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;C[RoseDuke\:  Enter 3.3 here looks interesting.  ]B[cq]
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;B[qb]
;W[rb]
;B[pb]
;W[pg]
;B[ne]
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;C[RoseDuke\: If black want to continue in this direction, then 13 is the only possible move in this given shape.  ]B[pg]
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;W[pf]
;C[Kogo's gives this move, although I'd try to push through the gap at the triangle. What do you think I should do here?]B[qc]TR[oe]
;W[nf]
;C[I either play here, or tenuki

RoseDuke\: Tenuki is right, play double peep here is a terrible mistake.  ]B[oe]
;W[of]
;B[ne]
;W[me]
;B[md]
;W[ld]
;B[mc]
;W[lc]
;B[nb]
;W[mb]
;B[nc]
;C[Joseki

RoseDuke\:  Cannot agree to this, black is lost already.  ]W[lf]
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